by Katie Fforde
At first I thought this book was everything I want in my chick-lit – three spunky heroines, a gorgeous setting, a narrowboat;

Picture taken by RHaworth, Creative Commons, Wikipedia
And two of the love interests were quite attractive.
& I liked the cleaning business idea. I’ve worked as a cleaner in the past and I do like seeing unglamorous jobs used in novels. We can’t all be fashion models after all. & I loved that the women were such supportive friends to each other.
The story starting coming a bit unglued in the middle. (but it was still a page turner) Originally May seemed to be the main character but all three were given [ love stories. May still seemed like the main character, but Sally (my favourite character) had a stronger love story and owned her sexuality. By around 80% Ms Fforde seemed to have lost interest in Harriet & Leo. I don’t blame her. I didn’t find Leo very interesting either!
So three characters as equal mains was too much for the writer to keep control of the story. The strands weren’t worked together equally. I had no trouble putting the book down when at 91% & frankly the ending was totally predictable – & not in a good way.
4★ beginning
3★ middle
2★ ending
As this is an early Fforde I may try another. I know she is a big Georgette Heyer fan and maybe she gets some of GH’s wit & deftness in her later books.
But I’m not in any rush.
